托福独立写作对考生词汇运用方面的要求中,比较重要也是相当基础的一点就是不要用错词汇。然而这许多同学却总是会在词汇上摔个跟头。
1、托福独立写作词汇错误:主谓一致
我们来看以下句子:
Admittedly, books written on the basis of realities is valuable to most people.
A less complicated social environment is the most agreeable condition that help maintain the simplicity of children’s mental world.
第一句句子的主语是books,因此谓语动词应该用复数形式are而不是is,这就是“主谓一致”,即:谓语动词在单复数形式上要和主语保持一致。因此原句的正确表达为:Admittedly, books written on the basis of realities are valuable to most people.
第二句句子的主语是a less complicated social environment,谓语动词应该用单数形式helps. 因此原句的正确表达为:A less complicated social environment is the most agreeable condition that helps maintain the simplicity of children’s mental world.
2、托福独立写作词汇错误:谓语动词的表现形式
我们来看以下句子:
Most students like to watch TV cannot finish their homework in time.
Children who find passion in sports holding on to this passion throughout life, which leads to a healthier and more successful future.
第一句句子中like to watch TV和cannot finish their homework in time都是谓语动词,一般而言,两个谓语动词需要用连词(如and或but)进行连接,或者可以将like to watch TV变为从句,如:Most students who like to watch TV cannot finish their homework in time(定语从句).
第二句句子没有谓语。句子中who find passion in sports是修饰children的“定语从句”,which leads to a healthier and more successful future是以which为引导的“非限定性定语从句”。整句句子的谓语动词应该是hold,而不应该使用非谓语形式(holding)。在托福独立写作中尤其要注意there be句型中“谓语的表现形式”,如:
There are a great variety of articles and topics accurately reflect the diversity of users’ interest.
因为there be句型中的be本身就是谓语成分,所以不能使用reflect,而应改为:There are a great variety of articles and topics that accurately reflect the diversity of users’ interest(定语从句);或There are a great variety of articles and topics accurately reflecting the diversity of users’ interest(非谓语结构)。
3、托福独立写作词汇错误:谓语动词的语态
“语态”表现的是主语和谓语之间的关系,托福独立写作中主要使用“主动语态”,不建议频繁使用“被动语态”。
我们来看以下句子:
Many children can avoid their most disliked courses if they are given the opportunity to choose.
Because the content of an e-book is delivered electronically to their devices, students can shop for e-books and receive them almost immediately, any time of the day or night.
第一句句子中“避免最不喜欢的课程”动作的发出者是“孩子们”,因此是“主动语态”;而他们“被”提供机会进行选择是“被动”的。第二句句子中“电子书的内容”和“将电子版本传输到学生的设备之中”是“被动”的关系,而学生“购买电子图书”和“不管白天还是黑夜,可以第一时间收到这些图书”都是“主动”的关系。 |