托福写作考试可以获得高分的简直是有很多人，但为什么有很多同学分数一直不是很高呢?获得高分的我们需要突破什么?
1.托福写作答题结构不平行
如I was able to raise my TOEFL score by studying hard and I read lots of books.
这句话的写作结构是有问题的，在一系列的单词并列连接在一起进，一般要使用词性相同或同一类型的短语。
2.表达方式不符合语言习惯
例子：Many companies began using computers mouth.
3.段落过长，不会分段的，主语与动词一致问题
例子：She are a good friend of mine that I has known for a long time.
主语和动词不一致。
4.句子别扭
例子：We heated the soup in the microwave for too long and the shape of the container changed.
措辞过长又或是不清。
5.拼写错误主语、动词又或是宾语有问题
如I want to buy something for my mother that she will like it. There was a terrible accident happen yesterday.
句子的基本结构有问题，缺少主语、动词或宾语，或者这些成分重复。
6.语气与文章不符
例子：I was kind of mad at the guy who vociferated angry words at me. I have heard many wonderful things about such cosmopolitan cities as Paris, and Hong Kong and I would love to visit these cities to check them out.
语气与文章其他部分不相符，可能是过于正式或者太不正式。
7.代词指代不明
例子：If people do not speak the same language, it has a greater chance of miscommunication. I intend to complete my studies in the United States because they have good programs there.
代词所指代的指示词(介词所代替的名词)不清楚。
8.过于笼统
例子：We should use our resources on Earth because the Earth is getting worse.
句子或者所表达的意思过于笼统，不可以提供多少信息。
9.托福写作答题使用动词的时态错误
例子：Yesterday I will go to the store because tomorrow I needed some food.
动词时态不正确，检查下是应该用现在时、过去时及将来时又或是完成时等等。
10.介词多余
例子：I would like to discuss about something important that you mentioned about to me during yesterday. We went to downtown yesterday to buy a watch. When I first came to the US, I did not have a lot of friends in here. In class, my classmate never mentioned about her husband.
在表示这种意思时此单词不能与介词连用。此情况常见的是downtown，there等词。这些词语在英语里是副词而并不是名词，所以不可以在它们前面添加介词。
11.跑题或不相关
例子：There are many reasons to buy a car, preferably a nice car.这个与okay for children to fail sometimes.所表达的意思很普通，大多数人都已经知道了，所以根本没有必要再说出来。
12.标点问题
例子：I love animals. And I like to help them. Because they are helpless. So I want to become a vet.
许多学生在句子中使用了太多的句号，尤其是当他们用手写的时候。
13.重复冗余
例子：Personally, I believe what the newspaper prints.
一种意思的表述不止一次，或者某个词语不必要。 |
