报告类大作文，交通类话题
Cycling is more environmentally friendly than other forms of transport. Why is it not popular in many places? And how to increase its popularity?
自行车比其他交通工具更加环保。为什么在很多地方它不流行?如何去提高它的受欢迎程度?
思路解析
这是一道报告类大作文，聊的是自行车流行率不高的原因和解决办法。报告类的文章结构比较简单，根据问什么答什么的原则，两个主体段分别对应两个问题，主体段1分析原因、主体段2提出解决办法。审题时要注意讨论对象是围绕着“cycling”展开，不要偏成其他交通工具。下面，月半鸭带大家来看下具体观点。
首先来看，为什么自行车更环保但是流行度不高，主要有三方面。
一是骑车本身需要依靠人力驱动，不断消耗体力对于许多人来说是难以接受的，而乘坐汽车或地铁则更加让人感到轻松。
二是自行车的使用受到天气和地理环境影响。一旦出现下雨、下雪甚至更加恶劣的天气环境，骑车出行对骑车者的身体健康和安全是一种挑战。而对于坡道和山地为主的城市来说(比如重庆)，有些人即使耗尽所有体力可能也难以骑车上坡，骑行反而让他们举步维艰。
三是对于远距离出行来说，骑车的效率过于低下。在常规路况下，开车一小时能达到距离，骑车可能要花费3倍甚至更多时间。这样的出行速度对于那些远距离上班者是不现实的，即使考虑到环保，也可以选择公共交通或地铁出行。
然后来看如何提高骑车的流行度，可以从两个角度入手。
一方面可以宣传骑车作为一种运动对人的身体健康是有益的，来提升人们对于骑行的接受度，并定期组织骑行活动和奖励来激励人们参加骑行。另一方面骑车在短距离出行上具有优势。因此，政府和企业可以投入共享单车等方式来提高自行车的覆盖率，满足人们这方面的需求，进而提升骑车的流行程度。
高分范文示例
In spite of the fact that riding bicycles is more environmentally-friendly other than any other vehicle， the two-wheeled mode of transport’s popularity began to disappear and are gradually replaced by their fuel-powered competitors. It seems to me that the manpower operating system and uncomfortable riding experience are the two main reasons for this unpopularity, with some suggestions proposed to cope with this predicament.
First of all, the efficiency of cycling is much lower compared with other fuel or electricity-powered vehicles. In other words, bikes are operated by human beings themselves, by which I mean cycling is more physically demanding but the speed of this is not satisfactory. Therefore, for the city commuters, especially those who are living in the metropolitan ones and have to travel a long distance to work on a daily basis, cycling can hardly be seen as a priority means compared with other transportation methods. Apart from the low efficiency, the poor riding experience also cannot be ignored. In most countries of the world, the weather is not that stabilized all year round. Except for the extreme weather such as storm or torrential rain, the daily temperature also brings people challenges while riding, especially during winter and summer.
There are several suggestions to alleviate the situation. First, the introduction of bike-sharing does contribute to the rescue of cycling, which effectively solves the ‘last mile’ problem. For example， In China， people can simply use their smart mobiles to unlock the bike, utilizing them during the last part of their destination where it is unreachable by the public systems and originally has to be arrived by walking. Second， cycling activities can also be organized as a kind of a routine. Although technological advances bring about enormous conveniences to people’s daily life, the lack of exercise has also emerged. Cycling is such a valuable method, which can reduce the risk of diseases such as diabetes, heart disease and several cancers. However, facing the daily mounting pressure, few people would prefer to exercise but rather stay at home. Thus, organizing the cycling activities by the government or certain associations can enhance the popularity of riding bikes and meanwhile enhance the overall health conditions of citizens.
In conclusion, the application of bike-sharing and the prevalence of cycling activities are the two solutions that I came up with.
相关词汇和语法结构
Bike-sharing 共享单车
Routine 常规
Diabetes 糖尿病
Manpower 人力
torrential rain 暴雨
Predicament 困境
Environmentally-friendly环保
Prevalence流行
Stabilize 稳定 |
