同学们雅思写作有多难你们造吗!!!又要保证自己能快速想出框架和思路，还得有丰富的词汇，语法还得正确。即使句子都写对了还是有可能踩到大雷区，与心爱的分数失之交臂!那就是连接不当!
很多同学以为衔接就是按照需求加连接词，一个不够那就再加一个!用了就分分钟很有逻辑的样子!但是就是这些看似小小的词汇表达，使用不当的话很容易让大家在考场上犯下致命的错误，使考官看得一头雾水反而分数下降 。
1、滥用连接词
First of all, the late parenthood is because of the rising cost of living. As we all know, young people are often paid less in the working world. Therefore, they are less likely to save enough money to guarantee a high standard of living. Furthermore, since most young people are well-educated, they are fully aware of the importance of living environment to a child’s growth. Besides, gender equality allows a large number of women to pursue their career ambitions.
基本上每句前面都会带上一组连接表达。不至于不至于没必要没必要。有的同学填充这些词好像已经成了习惯，be like：
但在考官眼里他们会觉得这是在凑字数，给作文评分时就会be like：
所以同学们一定要记住雅思写作确实非常考验逻辑，但绝不只是靠逻辑连接词就能实现。250字左右的雅思大作文，每一个单词都应该珍惜使用，千万不要为了用而去生搬硬套逻辑连接词!
除了滥用的问题外还有很多同学并没有意识到自己在误用、错用这些连接词!
2、误用、错用连接词
Ⅰ. Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation. Such as unsatisfactory job or shortage of money.
错误点：当such as 用于举例时不能单独成句，需要跟在被说明的内容之后。也不能用于句首或者句末，后面也不要加上逗号。
正确打开方式：Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation such as unsatisfactory job or shortage of money.
(例句出自剑桥雅思真题写作范文)
Ⅱ. Their solution is simply to just go with the flow. Because they think that they will learn something new along the journey.
错误点：because是连词，在规范写法中后面引领从句时非常不建议放在句首。
正确打开方式：Their solution is simply to just go with the flow because they think that they will learn something new along the journey.
Ⅰ. On one hand, home-working enables employees to work at ease. Nevertheless, these who are disabled can avoid many difficulties.
错误点：nevertheless 意思是“不过”，含有转折的意味;但此句中，第二句其实是对第一句的递进和扩展，所以两句的关系并不应该是转折。
正确打开方式：On one hand, home-working enables employees to work at ease. For example, those workers who are disabled can avoid many difficulties by working at home.
Ⅱ. Environmental pollution has become serious.Besides, all foods are at risk of getting contaminated.
错误点：besides是“此外”的意思，但这句话的逻辑关系其实是因果关系，所以逻辑出现了错误。
3、漏用连接词
漏用连接词虽然不会让句子语法出错，但同时也容易使考官看不出来逻辑的递进，最好不要因为怕出错而直接放弃连接词，大胆尝试小心琢磨，结果可能会意想不到地好!
Ⅰ. Home-working enables employees to work at ease. For example, those with childcare responsibilities could arrange their schedule flexibly.
Ⅱ. Working at home ensures employers’ multiple options in human resource.
这两句话的关系其实是平等的，相当于是同学们阐述“working at home”的好处时展开的两个观点。除了“for example”外为了突出这两个句子之间平等的地位，还应该用连接词展示出来
Home-working enables employees to work at ease. For example, those with childcare responsibilities could arrange their schedule flexibly. What’s more, working at home ensures employers’ multiple options in human resource. |
