雅思写作7分可以用的句型有哪些

时间:2022-05-10 19:36:17  作者:网络 来源:网络

  有的考生觉得雅思写作有难度,不妨从雅思小作文入手,逐步习得各种高级句型的用法,解决雅思小作文句型无法变高级的问题,同时还能为大作文的句子练习开一个好头哟~

  雅思小作文7分长什么样?可以看到7分考生的小作文中可以体现出句型的多样性,且不管是简单句还是复杂句都基本没有错误,偶尔有几个也在可接受范围内;6分的考生也会综合使用一些复杂句和简单句。也就意味着如果只写简单句,即使一句都没有出错,考官也没有办法给同学们6分及以上。而且即使是7分的考生,也不是必须要通篇复杂句,二者比例得当即可。

  所以上面的投票中选择了“D”的同学是正确的,也说明你们对评分标准有一些研究,接下来就带着大家来看看7分考鸭会使用什么样的复杂结构!

  如何让句型升级到7分?

  为了让你们更好地感受高分句型对图表数据归纳的作用,接下来都将会用下面的这道题来举例

  The chart compares how well students from a range of disciplines did in their Year 1 assessments in 2008 and 2012.

  下面就跟同学们说一下让句型升级的三种手段:

  连词组句

  多数的考生其实不太会使用逻辑关系,所以简单但有效的就是用连词来表明前后两个单句的关系。连词的使用场景很多变,比如表原因结果、转折让步、单纯并列等。

  At just over 80% in 2012 and 70% in 2018, average pass rates among Computer Science students were by far the highest, but/while students studying Humanities had the lowest pass rates in both years.

  还有一种情况就是用连词把图表中的细节概括出来,形成更宏观的表达

  改为→2008 pass rates in Business, Science, and Maths and Engineering were considerably lower in 2008 than in 2012, so the greatest level of improvement took place in these disciplines.

  介词短语

  介词短语可以很好地把两个写得比较啰嗦的单句组合在一起,打个比方:

  这两句中的信息点是有重合的,而这个问题在追求精准高效的雅思写作中肯定是不受考官欢迎的。这个时候就可以直接把第一句中加粗的地方删去,改为:

  At just over 80% in 2012 and 70% in 2008,average pass rates among Computer Science students were by far the highest.

  上面这种情况重复的信息较为单一,改写起来比较简单,再来看下面这两个句子↓↓↓

  这两句重复的信息比较隐蔽,读起来总是没有那么清爽利落,可以把“the pass rate in business”省略掉,用介词把“2008&2012”和“the two years”进行关联↓↓↓

  The percentage change between the two years from 20% in 2008 to 50% in 2012 was clearly the most marked for those studying Business.

  或者

  The percentage change between the two years from a considerably lower level (20%)in 2008 to a much higher on(50%)in 2012 was clearly the most marked for those studying Business.

  除了“from…to…”之外,其它能使用在小作文中提升句子质量的介词包括但不限于:in、on、between、by、until、with、for、at等等,感兴趣的同学都可以找到自己之前练习过的小作文中信息有些重复过多的句子,用这些介词来进行改写练习哦~

  定语从句

  定语从句应该是大家使用得较为得心应手的一个句型,不要觉得它低级,用得好了照样给小作文添彩!

  用“which”连接两句就可以这么写:

  Meanwhile the Health Science experienced the most stable pass rate, which remained at 40% in the entire period surveyed.

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