雅思大作文范文及解析:学习本地历史更重要

时间:2022-06-21 16:38:00  作者:网络 来源:网络

观点类大作文,教育类话题

 

It is more important for school children to learn about their local history than the world history. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

 

题目来源:2022年6月4日大陆雅思大作文(重复2016年1月9日亚太考题)

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题目大意

让学生学习本地历史比国外历史更重要,是否同意?

 

 

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思路解析

这是一道观点类大作文,聊的是本地历史和世界历史的重要性对比。题目理解起来不难,审题上注意题目观点包含了一个比较逻辑,因此在论证时两个比较对象都需要提及。一般遇到缺乏前提,就认为A比B重要的观点,建议从反对角度切入会更好写。下面,月半鸭和大家来看下具体观点。

 

首先,让学生学习本地历史确实重要,有两方面。

一是让学生能更好地传承文化,在学习历史过程中,往往会了解到本地特有的文字、艺术、精神、理念等等,只有在了解这些文化的发展起源和背后含义后,才能产生认同感并进行传播。

二是增加学生对当地的归属感,通过了解这片土地发展的过程、了解祖辈做过事情以及自己现在的生活环境是如何变化而来的,将增加学生对自己身份的认同感和对这个地区的归属感。

 

再来看学习世界历史的重要性,同样有两方面。

对于学生个人来说,在全球化的背景下,未来有很大可能会接触到世界不同地区的人们,包括旅游、工作等等情况。学习世界历史有助于他们更好地了解对方,降低沟通和理解的障碍。此外,如果学生未来想要学习世界经济、政治等科目,了解世界历史也是必要的基础。

从学术和文化角度来说,本地史和世界史是难以分割的。纵观历史发展,不同的文明和民族不断在互相接触、沟通、冲突、融合,一个地方的发展往往会受到另一个地方的影响,很难说谁能够独善其身。想要更好地理解本地历史,明白当时事物发展的逻辑,往往需要了解同时期世界发生了什么。

 

 

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提纲

图片

 

 

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高分范文示例

Though there are differences in tradition and culture from region to region, and each region has a history of its own, they form the unity or spirit of oneness that is known as world history when combined. Therefore, the study of local and world history is equally important, as they are inextricably linked and interdependent. 

 

There is an unbroken chain by which local history is indissolubly linked with the world history. On the one hand, studying the big picture of history such as the rise and fall of civilizations, major social and economic reforms and other events affecting the entire nation, peoples and the world at large is of critical significance. On the other hand, we should bear in mind that individuals, locales and communities all played a role in shaping and being shaped by the world history. Local history can be seen as a small-scale reflection of the grand scheme of historical development as it contains a wealth of details and stories that reveal how social changes impacted the lives of ordinary people, which in turn make up the larger pattern.  

 

Local history and the world history interact with each other since the process of history is in effect about encounters, connections, integrations and assimilations, especially in the context of globalisation. For centuries, local cultures and traditions have been invariably associated with a wide range of adaptations and assimilations in response to foreign conquests, religious conversions, new technologies, strangers from afar and overseas imported commodities. As a result, many aspects including state constitutional structures and social foundations along with policy responses to challenges and opportunities tend to be the products of local-global connections. 

 

In short, local history and world history, despite their diversities, share a strong invisible under-current of unity that nourishes and sustains the other. Therefore, comprehending the long-run history of humanity necessitates equal emphasis being placed on both of them. 

 

 

 

 

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相关词汇和语法结构

indissolubly  不可分解的;不可溶解的

scheme  计划、方案、体系、计谋

integration   结合、整合、一体化

assimilation  同化

constitutional  宪法的、章程的

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