雅思大作文范文及解析:投资太空探索不值得

时间:2022-06-22 14:55:43  作者:网络 来源:网络

观点类大作文,科技类话题

 

Some people believe that spending money on developing technology for space exploration is unjustifiable; there are more beneficial ways to spend money. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

 

题目来源:2018年12月1日大陆雅思大作文

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题目大意

一些人认为花钱开发太空探索技术是不合理的,有其他更有益的方式来花这笔钱。你是否同意

 

 

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思路解析

这是一道观点类大作文,讨论的是太空探索的花费是否合理的问题。题目理解上不难,审题时注意两点,一是题目讨论的范围限定在“space exploration”上,因此要围绕这点展开讨论。二是观点认为“探空探索的花费不合理”,unjustifiable表达比较绝对,且并没有给出明确的前提,因此从反对角度切入会更合适,下面月半鸭和大家来看下具体观点。

 

首先来看赞同的角度。

如果一个国家本身发展水平一般且政府资金有限,那么政府确实应该考虑将资金投入更多民生相关的领域。对于欠发达的国家来说,教育、医疗、工业、基础建设等方面都需要投入资金建设,并且这些领域的发展能给居民带来更直接的收益、改善民众的日常生活。相比之下,太空探索不仅需要耗费大量的资金,还需要整个国家的科学、工业、人才等方面的支持。因此,在缺乏基础领域支持的情况下,政府投入大量资金在太空探索上也没有实际意义。

 

然后来看反对的角度。

对于综合实力比较强的国家来说,投入资金发展太空探索是有价值的。在研究太空探索的过程中,往往会带动许多相关领域的进步,许多科学成果在民生领域的运用也能极大改善人们的生活质量。比如,比如我们现在习惯使用的GPS定位技术和通信技术,都离不开卫星的支持,而卫星的出现正是太空探索的成果之一。而当下人们所关注的能源、居住空间等问题,或许都能在太空探索的过程中找到解决办法。

 

 

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高分范文示例

Over the last few decades, with Armstrong’s successful landing on the moon, people have never stopped exploring this mysterious field, pouring millions or even billions into outer space. Some people doubt the justifiability of this issue, but I hold the opinion that this effort makes sense. 

 

Undoubtedly, the government’s budget is limited and ordinary people are more interested in public facilities such as water supply system and education, which have a direct impact on their living standards. For instance, good sanitation and clean water can improve people's physical health and reduce diseases, while schools offer an appropriate atmosphere to popularize knowledge and improve youngsters’ job prospects. These improvements seem to be more essential for most city dwellers.

 

However, skeptics of space research take it for granted that other areas including public facilities deserve more public money, ignoring the human endeavor made in space exploration and its substantial benefits, some of which are likely to be invisible in a short term. The fact is that several technological advances have been applied widely in people’s daily life and exert an indispensable influence owing to the development of space exploration. People are accustomed to viewing weather forecast before going out and using the navigation systems on the cell phone to find the best way to unfamiliar destinations. What’s more, the problem of population explosion has become increasingly severe; therefore, it is understandable to look for other suitable alternatives with larger space to hold more people via investing in the space research. 

 

In conclusion, although some other fields affect citizens’ lives more directly, it is justified for governments to allocate certain amount of money to explore the space especially if their budget is not tight. 

 

 

 

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相关词汇和语法结构

make sense   有意义

undoubtedly   毋庸置疑地

job prospects   就业前景

city dwellers   市民

skeptics   怀疑者

take it for granted   认为…是理所当然的

deserve   应受,应得

substantial   大量的,价值巨大的

technological advances   技术进步

indispensable   重要的,不可缺少的

be accustomed to   习惯于…

population explosion    人口爆炸

alternatives   替代

 

 

 

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