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题目：Some argue that the spread of multinational companies and the resulting increase of globalization produce positive effects for everyone. To what extent do you agree or disagree？

开头段：Nowadays, more companies are establishing branches all over the world. Some people believe that the globalization as a result of this trend might cause potential harm for people in different nations because it would make it easier for dumping products to other countries. However, from my perspective, the improved economic development as well as encouraged international communication arising from globalization can contribute to substantial advance in living quality of citizens on Earth, boosting the advance in academic and pollical fields.

主体段1:Admittedly, globalization would lead to a reduction in the trade protection policies which involves cutting down tariff or reducing limitations for importing goods and this would inevitably causing surplus or deficit of trade, in turn, benefiting those countries which produce high added value products but damaging those which import high amounts of commodities as their local industry development would be obstructed. Nevertheless, the positive impact of increased multinational company cannot be ignored considering the enhanced collaboration between countries and the greater efficiency of production as a result of the better allocation of tasks for manufacturing goods. More specifically, different countries have varied leading industries, so they can focus on different stages within producing consumer goods. For example, countries with abundant metal resources can concentrate on smelting and producing metal with high quality and relatively low price. By achieving a higher cost-effectiveness, price of products would be reduced, which stimulates purchase of customers, thus, leading to economic development worldwide. Therefore, as more products of improved functions while maintaining reasonable price available, people can enjoy a higher living quality.

主体段2:Furthermore, stronger economic activities between nations offers more chance for communication on both academic and political level. Not only can the cutting-edge technologies and theories be shared more freely, but also it allows the cooperation between researchers, utilizing the combined abilities and knowledge so greater contributions can be made. As for diplomacy, improved relationship between countries reduces the difficulty in reaching consensus and signing agreements, especially in urgent issues such as environmental preservation. Thus, it can be deduced that globalization is beneficial for the harmony of international community.

结尾段：In conclusion, establishment of stronger economical bonding of different countries can bring better material condition for all the citizens around the globe with the leap in economic development and the concordant relationship constructed within nations.

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