雅思写作提分妙招分享

　　雅思写作一直都是中国考生的弱项，如果考鸭们写出来的作文结构不合理，词汇单调贫乏，句型结构缺乏变化，语法错误频出，便无法拿到高分。

　　段落与观点

　　Make the paragraph the unit of composition: one paragraph to each topic

　　不同的段落构成文章，每个段落仅传递一个观点

　　主题句做开头

　　the topic sentence comes at or near the beginning

　　每个段落均以主题句开头，并且首尾呼应

　　the succeeding sentences explain or establish or develop the statement made in the topic sentence

　　段落围绕主题句展开，后面的句子对主题句进行展开解释

　　the final sentence either emphasizes the thought of the topic sentence or states some important consequence.

　　末尾句或者对主题句进行强调，或者阐述主题句带来的结果

　　多用主动句

　　主动句永远比被动句直接有力

　　Eg: There were a great number of dead leaves lying on the ground

　　= Dead leaves covered the ground(清晰生动)

　　Eg:The reason that he left college was that his health became impaired.

　　= Failing health compelled him to leave college(简洁有力)

　　Eg: It was not long before he was very sorry that he had said what he had.

　　= He soon repented his words(简洁有力)

　　肯定的形式表达否定

　　避免使用平淡、毫无色彩，含糊其辞的语言

　　Eg：He was not very often on time.

　　= He usually came late.

　　Eg: He did not think that studying Latin was much use.

　　= He thought the study of Latin useless.

　　删除冗词

　　有力的写作一定简洁

　　Owing to the fact that

　　=Since (because)

　　In spite of the fact that

　　=Though (although)

　　Call your attention to the fact that

　　=Remind you (notify you)

　　别写流水账

　　寻找语言的逻辑关系

　　通过who, which, when, where, and while 这些词把句子串起来。

　　讲究对称美

　　内容对等，结构一致

　　Eg: Formerly, science was taught by the textbook method, while now the laboratory method is employed.

　　Parallel structure: Formerly, science was taught by the textbook method; now it is taught by the laboratory method.