雅思大作文范文及解析:垃圾回收不充分的原因

时间:2022-06-21 16:44:49  作者:网络 来源:网络

报告类大作文,环境类话题

 

In some countries there is not enough recycling of waste materials. (e.g. paper, glass and cans)   What are the reasons and solutions?

 

题目来源:2015年9月26日大陆雅思大作文

 

 

1

题目大意

在一些国家没有对废弃材料(如纸,玻璃瓶和罐头盒)进行充足的回收。原因和解决方式是什么?

 

 

2

思路解析

这是一道报告类的大作文,讨论的是废物回收再利用的问题。报告类题目结构比较简单,两个主体段,主体段一回答没有充分回收的原因,主体段二提出解决办法。题目理解上不难,前两年国内大力推广垃圾分类大家应该都经历过。审题时要注意,题目没有问垃圾回收不充分的危害,因此大家不必讨论这一点,不然会有偏题的问题,下面有月半鸭大家来看下具体观点。

 

首先来说不充分的原因,可以分为主观和客观两方面。

客观层面来说,可能是由于资金和技术上的不足。纸张、玻璃和罐头想要充分回收再利用,一方面需要专业的技术来有效处理,而不是简单的填埋或者焚烧。另一方面也需要花成本配备专门的回收点和人力来进行处理。因此,缺少资金和技术的国家,很难客观上做到充分回收。

主观层面来说,可能是由于大众环保意识的浅薄。普通人很难在废弃物的回收利用中感受到实际好处,而那些潜在的环境危害对他们生活来说也显得非常遥远,因此缺少足够的动力去参与到这一过程中。

 

然后来看解决办法,主要有两个。

一是财政有盈余的政府可以投入更多资金在垃圾回收处理的技术和配套设施上,或是可以出台相应的税收等优惠政策鼓励企业参与其中,以弥补资金上的不足。

二是政府可以加大宣传和激励措施,通过更多的公益广告和宣传手段,让普通人意识到充分回收对于环保的重要性,以及对他们未来生活的益处。同时,通过激励措施让更多人参与到过程中,比如做好垃圾分类,以便于后期更好的对垃圾进行回收处理。

 

 

3

提纲

图片

 

 

4

高分范文示例

Due to rapid growth in urbanization and industrialization, waste utilization becomes an important aspect of the conservation of the environment. However, in some countries, the recycling of waste materials is unable to meet the expectations. It seems to me that the lack of equipment and awareness regarding the recycling of garbage are the two main culprits.

 

Initially, the issue can be largely due to the lack of recycling sites and matching equipment. After all, in some countries, the government cannot make purchases on enough recycling sites due to the deprived financial conditions. Even if other countries can afford these, the current technology has limited the reuse of the waste materials even after collecting them. The waste is either shipped to landfills or burnt in incinerators, either way leading to an unnecessarily large amount of toxic soil and water pollution that can harm the ecosystems. Besides, this problem can also be attributed to the lack of awareness of recycling, by which I mean individual recycling efforts have no real overall impact. Misinformation about overflowing landfills and depleted resources has convinced some non-recycles that the contribution to recycling can hardly make a difference, which seems to be a waste of time and causes inconveniences at the same time. 

 

Several methods could be adopted in order to solve the aggravating problem in the hope of alleviating the situation. First, the government should strive to support and compensate for the relative careers as one of the priorities.  After all, in order to have the full realization of rubbish collection eventually, the advanced technology plays a crucial role, which requires enormous funds, talents and policy support. Second, sufficient education regarding this issue is also indispensable. On the one hand, the educational authorities could try to add some selective subjects to let children and teenagers absorb the knowledge directly, and meanwhile as for the general public, more non-profit advertisements should be demonstrated, not only related to the importance of recycling, but the knowledge of how to recycle of waste materials.

 

To summarize, in order to avoid the deterioration of the environment, allocating more financial support and adequate education are the two solutions that I came up with. 

 

 

 

 

5

相关词汇和语法结构

urbanization and industrialization 城市化和工业化

waste utilization 废物利用

recycling sites 垃圾回收站

Landfills 土地掩埋

 burnt in incinerators 在焚化炉里焚烧

toxic 有毒的

Misinformation 误传

overflowing 过剩

Deplete 耗尽

aggravating problem 恶化的问题

In the hope of 为了

Alleviate 缓解

non-profit advertisement 公益广告

 conservation of the environment 环境保护

Allocate financial support 分配财政

adequate education 充足的教育

关键字:雅思写作考试,雅思写作培训,雅思写作,

推荐资讯
Contact Us