雅思大作文范文及解析:人们可以自由发出噪音

时间:2022-08-01 17:22:21  作者: 来源:

双边类大作文,环境类话题

 

Some people think that the amount of noise people make should be controlled strictly, while other say that people are free to make as much noise as they wish. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

 

题目来源:2015年1月17日大陆雅思大作文

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题目大意

一些人认为人们发出的噪音应该被严格限制,然而其他人认为人们应该自由地发出噪音。讨论双方观点并给出自己的观点。

 

 

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思路解析

这是一道双边类的题目,讨论的是限制噪音和个人自由的问题。双边类的题目,需要对每个观点分别表达同意或反对,最终的结论就是我的立场,可以是中立(双方都同意或都反对),也可以是单边支持某一方立场。审题时注意需要注意限定对象“noise”,是噪音而非普通的声音,并且也无需讨论别的无关事宜。下面,月半鸭和大家一起来看下具体观点。

 

首先看前者观点的合理性。

一是许多时候噪音严重影响了他人的正常生活,比如在餐厅、公交车或图书馆等密闭场合,持续的噪音会干扰到其他人完成自己的事物,分散他们的注意力。而在深夜的吵闹声,更是会影响到周围邻居的休息质量,使得他们难以入睡。诸如此类干扰他人的行为应当被限制。

二是大量长期的噪音不利于人们的身体健康。长期在噪音环境中,人们不仅会变得烦躁和易怒,甚至还会变得神经衰弱,出现头晕、头疼等症状。考虑大众的身体健康因素,包括人为在内的噪音应该尽可能减少。

 

然后来看后者观点的合理性。

有的人认为人们有权做自己想做的事情,这是其自由不应受到侵犯。同时,许多噪声能够用来表达相应的情绪,比如大声呵斥能表达愤怒、欢呼能表达喜悦等,这都是人的自然反应。

而在一些特定场合,人们发出大的声音是合理的。比如体育比赛、演唱会、生日聚会、婚礼等现场,人们往往会有呐喊和吼叫来体现自己的支持,并且这也使得现场看上去更加热闹,有更好的氛围感。

 

*注:这道题目和另一道写作原题很相似“Some people think they have right to use as much fresh water as they want, while others believe governments should tightly control the use of fresh water as it is a limited resources.  Discuss both views and give your opinion.”,两者都是讨论个人权利与被限制的问题,有兴趣的同学可以点击链接看下另一道题解析。

 

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提纲

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范文示例

It takes centuries for the inhabitants of the planet to transform into a civilized society. The traditions and norms that were considered as a great value are gradually replaced by modern etiquette and manners. Being a citizen of democratic society, one has the right to express their own feelings, such as making noise, but others believe that the freedom of expression in high decibel should be regulated. This essay will delve into both views before presenting an opinion. 

 

On the one hand, it is argued that civilians have their own right to do whatever they like. This is their fundamental right and making noise is one of them which should be the choice of an individual. For example, in sporting events, such as soccer game, inspectors and cheer leaders make noises and yell as much as possible for their players and this high decibel reflects their passion and support. For another, at birthday party, family members and friends make decibels to their peak for celebrating this moment and the recipient understand this noisy situation. Therefore, under certain circumstance, some noises can be understandable. 

 

On the other hand, to be quiet is one of the civil etiquette and manners which show respect to the neighbors and others who may be easily distracted from what they are doing. To be more specific, the relationship between neighbors would be worsen if there were high decibel of noise from an overnight party. And this is to violate the laws and regulations which were implemented to guarantee the security and harmony of the whole society. So, it is the obligation of government to warn civilians of their illegal behaviors because they distract and discomfort individuals who are sick, studying or sleeping and so on. For example, in UK, one can be jailed if disturbing their neighbors through loud music or quarrel. 

 

To recapitulate, the aforementioned provides strong argument in favor of both views. I believe that noise level should be regulated in some certain areas, like residential areas, and other public ones while one should be allowed to express or even vent their strong feelings under certain circumstance, like sports stadium and other celebration which should be warranted in advance. 

 

 

 

 

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相关词汇和语法结构

Inhabitants  居民

Etiquette  礼仪

Democratic  民主的

Delve into  探讨

Inspector  观众

Cheer leader  啦啦队

Decibel  分贝

Discomfort  使……不舒适

Aforementioned  以上所提及的

Warranted  授权的

 

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