| 3 月 15 日的雅思纸笔考试，写作部分作为整场考试的关键环节，其题型设置与难度变化备受关注。此次写作任务涵盖小作文流程图与大作文利弊分析，对考生的语言运用、逻辑组织及知识储备均提出了较高要求。接下来，我们将深入剖析此次雅思写作考情，为后续备考的同学提供极具价值的参考。
The diagram below shows the process of making a storage area from a material called concrete canvas.
本次考试考察的是流程图，图形比较复杂抽象，且有不常见词汇。而且，所描述的流程本身也是大家实际生活不熟悉的，加上一些用词在图例信息中无提示，要靠自己的理解和常识进行选择，导致本次流程图写作难度较大。但是开头段和概述段还是按照常规的写法写即可，这两部分没有太大难度，主体段分段可从第三部后分开。
The diagram illustrates how a storage area is established by using concrete canvas.
The given procedure involves 8 steps, beginning with the production of concrete canvas and ending with using the storage area.
To begin with, 第一步是manufacturing the concrete canvas，which consists of three different components. The surface is made from fibrous materials.中间层是dry concrete, and the the third layer needs waterproof materials. Subsequently, the concrete canvas is delivered by the truck to a designated place where it is unwrapped.
In the forth stage, the concrete canvas is spread on the ground and pegs are used to fix it. At the same time, 绳子会被fastened to the truck, and the truck is supposed to move in order to drag and extend the concrete canvas. Next, air is pumped into the canvas, 直到 it is 8 meters in height. 同时，a door is installed. After it is inflated, 水is sprayed onto the canvas to make the material become hard. Following this, the construction needs 20 to 24 hours to solidify. Finally, the structure can be utilized as a storage space.
Many young people today choose their future careers based on the salary they will earn. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
本次大作文考察的是利弊分析类，话题是常见的工作类。题目中的话题提到，很多年轻人都基于工资来选择自己的职业，需要考生分析这一现象的利弊。
开头段改写题目，清晰写好自己的立场是利大于弊。主体段1可以写立论段，即说清楚有什么好处：年轻人会把工资高低当作就业的首要标准，对他们个人来说，选择高工资的行业就意味着有生活保障也能用积累到的收入去满足精神需求；对公司来说，本来一些高技术岗位就有高工资，需要的是优秀人才，而这部分人才如果刚好也是基于工资选择就业，当他们得到理想工资，那么就实现了双向奔赴，这些员工会使公司更加具备活力。主体段2，可以写驳论段，反面的立场原因及解释，然后给出反驳部分即可。
Paragraph1-Introduction
Many young candidates prioritize the salary when selecting their future jobs. In my opinion, the drawbacks are outweighed by the benefits.
Paragraph 2 - 立论段-explain benefits
Argument 1: A high paid job satisfies one’s basic needs and at the same time provides the chance to spend the surplus in fulfilling one’s dreams.
Extension: In an era featuring rising living costs and economic uncertainty, 高工资首先能满足基本需求such as housing, food, and healthcare. 除了这些基本需求，很多年轻的打工人需要pursue spiritual satisfaction，比如旅游，去看演唱会和investing in hobbies. 这些都会增加financial burden.因此，年轻人有一个工作with high remuneration, 能更好的 getting rid of undue pressure.
Argument 2: Young people securing high pay also bring more vigour for companies.
Extension: 首先，对于公司来说，高工资的岗位往往招聘的是high skilled professionals. 这些员工are agile and adaptive, 是公司create innovation的基础。而且，因为如果这些highly capable的员工成功得feel financially valued, 他们会更有motivation and are willing to be engaged in work, stimulating vitality in companies.
Paragraph 3 -驳论段- drawbacks and rebuttal
Counterargument : In contrast to the above arguments, some pessimists argue that this trend may lead to a lack of diversity in the workforce.
Extension: 随着很多人flock to high-paying fields such as AI and the automobile industry, 其他岗位比如护士，教师还有social worker等可能会被求职者忽略。甚至更严重，可能会undermine the significance of these jobs.
Rebuttal: This view fails to realize that it is governments and organizations instead of individuals that should be blamed for the possible repercussions.
Extension: 在年轻人追随高工资也是想要确保自身的financial stability, 如果工资没有meet their expectation，即便是他们选择上述领域的工作，大多数人的 dedication may see a decrease as time rolls on，最终还是一样会出现a shortage of labour. 而政府和相关组织可以采取proactive measures to attract top talent. 例如，他们可以提供competitive salaries and improve working conditions. 这些措施可以让更多的graduates 对这些岗位感兴趣。
Paragraph 4-Conclusion
In conclusion, the positive impacts of this trend dwarf the downsides because it generates benefits for young people and companies. While some worry that there will be a shrinking workforce in relevant industries, governments and organization are able to retain workers by applying effective strategies.
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