接触过托福的考生应该清楚写作部分必须要多多的重视，主要是写作属于输出项目，大部分同学们都会遇到没有足够内容写，写作的思路根本不够的情况。因此针对不少托福新手来说写作想拿到30分满分的确是一项挑战。
那么满分作文到底长什么样子呢?自己与满分作文间有什么样的差距呢?在最新出版的《托福官方指南第六版》中已经给出了一些全新例题和参考范文。本文老师为同学们整理了被ETS官方评为High-Level的独立写作范文，让我们一起学习一下优秀范文~
独立写作题目：
Do you agree or disagree with the followin statement?
Students are more influenced by their teachers than by their friends.
高分范文：
In my opinion, students are more influenced by their friends rather than their teachers. Therefore, I disagree with the statement "Students are more influenced by their teachers than by their friends."
I do not disagree with the fact that students get influenced by their teachers, I believe that this "influence" is mostly within the field of academics. In most cases, the only time that students communicate with the teacher is in the school building, in the classroom. Most of the discussions are about topics related to studies. However, with friends, students often tend to discuss a variety of topics, such as studies, friends, and families. Therefore, students are generally influenced more broadly by their friends, while the only influence made by the teachers are mostly academical.
The amount of time spent with the teacher or friend, also effect on how much influence has been made to a person. As mentioned previously, the time that students communicate with the teachers is restricted to school hours. However, students spend or communicate with their friends not only in school but even outside the school campus and school hours. Especially with the emerging technology, and the development of mobile phones and the internet, students are now able to communicate with their friends at any time where ever they are. Since the amount of time spent communicating with their friends are much larger than the time spent with the teachers, there are more chance of the students being influenced by their friends rather than their teachers.
Also, it is normal that the students feel psychologically more attached to the people in their age group, especially with their friends. The teachers are usually from different generations from the students and this may cause the students to feel that there is a distance between how they think/feel and how the teachers think/feel. Since the students are more emotionally and psychologically attached to their friends, they feel more comfortable to discuss their issues with them and accept their responses more openly and easily. This fact relates directly to how much they are influenced by their friends.
For these reasons, I believe that students are more influenced by their friends than by their teachers.
在这篇参考范文的前面，标注了这篇文章属于High-Level Response. 而根据官方文件，High Level对应具体分数的范围是(25-30分)。 |
